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Ah, very nice stuff here! You do a wonderful evocation of central background themes and characters!

The Autobot chuckled darkly. "Nice try kiddo. But no dice. I never leave a job unfinished. Never. I guess I could just step on you…but I don't want all that nasty organic fluid and tissue all over me and have it gunk up my joints and all. Nu-uh, no thanks. I don't understand how Cliffjumper could like coating himself in human circulating fluid the way he does. It's disgusting. And one little human isn't worth a trip to the repair bay to have Dr. Psycho unclog my joints with an arch welder. No, you'll just have to wait, sorry. But hey, at least it'll be more…what's the word, ah! Humane. It'll be more humane this way. No suffering. No loose ends. Quick and clean-,er well, relatively clean."

But then, he was not one to point such things to his superiors or else he should find himself in a number of grisly places; Perceptor's lab, Ratchet's repair bay, Prowl's office, or…Lord Prime's quarters. He had only visited the room once, and under good terms, but never again if he could help it.

You present a very engaging main character with lots of spunk. I look forward to seeing how she works with other indiginous resistance fighters, and what you have in mind for her return to sight!